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Chocolate: The Love AffairChocolate I love it more than life itself. I know it sounds pretty weird for an early thirty year old man who's balding and has made a resolve to stop eating it so often, especially in Fall, to admit, but it's the truth. It's the star of my life. It means so much to me that I can't imagine a world without it. It completes me, makes me whole, and fills me up it's my everything. The only thing I could ever possibly treasure. Perhaps the only thing that'll maintain me to my scarlet end.Chocolate: The Love Affair
My friends told me that they think I'm having a love affair. Some type of hot, spicy relationship that revolves around me cuddling it i


Will a "No" Suffice?Sometimes I have to sit and wonder what it is people want from me. They ask me a question, I give them my response, and for some reason, whatever I answer with is just not enough for them. They have to keep pushing, digging, pulling, and dragging the conversation out until I no longer even want to think about it. Its annoying. No, its not even that. Its time-consuming and a considerable waste of life that could have been used on something more desirable, like eating a sandwich. One could be wondering why I brought this up in the first place or why Im even thinking about it. Its simple really. Some people just donWill a "No" Suffice?


Abstract LoveYou can say that you love me, But Ill never understand The attraction or pull To one woman or one man.Abstract Love
To say that you love
So completely and full Is a mystery like no other Because I wasnt raised a fool.
Its an abstract idea An enigma, a mystery That one states to deal From the confusion they yield.
Because its not hugs and rainbows Or kisses and flowers, Its dedicating ones self Beyond that one hour.
Its living and being, Together as one. No more long d


His Incredible StoryHarry sat upon his chair with a small smirk upon his face. He liked the attention he was gathering. Not many people paid attention to him post well, post the event that made him the talk of the town heck, the nation! He was nothing out of the ordinary; so upon first look, one wouldnt be sure as to why he was a local celebrity. It most certainly wasnt because of his looks or his brains. It was a wide known story. One he loathed to tell at a time not so long ago, but in an effort to hold onto and maintain his fading fame, he told it as often as he could. The people, unknown to Harry, grew tired of his ego, but felt the neeHis Incredible Story
I know it is long, but I REALLY need feedback! Even if you just read half of it to give me an idea on how it's going?? It's totally cool if you can't or don't want too, just thought I'd ask cause I need help and you read chapter 1, so you might even like it!! Hope that's ok!!
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